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#1 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 9:53 AM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  All      [Msg # 62276.1 ]    

This is the thread where we introduce the characters who will  be taking part in the January House Party: Bring Your Character to Therapy. (For an explanation, check here.)

Just append a message to this thread, and tell us your character's name, age, gender, and physical description, and any other details you think it might be important for the doctor to know. You don't have to reveal everything--save the juicy details for the therapy session. You can write up the character description in an objective way (i.e., Belinda is 35, red-headed, and short), or you can use a short excerpt from your WIP that does the job for you.

When the House Party begins, it will run six days. Jen, Jenny, and myself will each take the role of therapist for two days. You can join the sessions at any time, but once you join, try to check back several times each day to keep the conversation active. You'll get the most out of it that way.

Any questions?

~Beth

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Edited 1/9/09   by  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
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     Posted 1/9/09 11:39 AM   
Lorraine
 
From  Lorraine  Posts 1133  Last Oct-1
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.2 Message 62276.2 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

I've never done one of these, but I'm up for it.

Swithun Cooper, 20.

Description from draft. (There's more, but it doesn't belong in this folder.)

     The girl facing him didn't smile. She didn't shudder. He couldn't be certain if she was woman or child and it made him uncomfortable, but children aren't sensuous. Children don't move their bodies the way she did. He had the urge to protect her, stop her from doing what she was about to do. About to do for him.

     She reached to remove the pins from her hair and a sandy mist unfolded in thick layers, puddling down her shoulders, glowing in the beam of light coming through the window. Her face was in half-shadow. It showed a dimple, the indentation of a small scar above her lip and  the soft line of her nose. Bright blue eyes watched him as he watched her. This was no child. (copyright L.Syratt 2008)

Hope this is enough.

Lorraine

Edited to repair draft a little

A Twist of Rotten Silk


Edited 1/9/09   by  Lorraine

Edited 1/9/09   by  Lorraine
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#3 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 3:54 PM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Lorraine      [Msg # 62276.3 Message 62276.3 replying to 62276.2 62276.2 ]    

Hi Lorraine,

It's a great description of the girl. <g> But I need to know what he looks like.

~Beth

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#4 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 4:01 PM   
Lorraine
 
From  Lorraine  Posts 1133  Last Oct-1
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.4 Message 62276.4 replying to 62276.3 62276.3 ]    

Huh? Oh, wait, Swithun is the girl. It's the only description of her I could find quickly and it's through his pov. You did only want one character, right?

Lorraine

Edited to add

I just had a look at your first post and nothing about plural. Please set me straight. Thanks

A Twist of Rotten Silk


Edited 1/9/09   by  Lorraine
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#5 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 4:38 PM   
Esmeann
 
From  Esmeann  Posts 1082  Last 5:17 PM
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.5 Message 62276.5 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

Hi Beth,

I'll be sending Fidelis to get therapy. He is in his late thirtieth, but doesn't know his exact age. He joined the Cistercian community aged around 12 (probably). He was illiterate when he joined, but is now quite well educated, and has progressed into priesthood. He sticks to the celibacy-rule, even though he now lives mainly outside of the monastery to take care of his "flock".

As to what he looks like, he is not very tall, skinny and tends to be the one nobody notices in a crowd. This changes, of course, when he is wearing his priest-outfit - but this tends to be the thing people notice, and not his actual looks.

Hope this is enough information,

Esmé
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     Posted 1/9/09 4:44 PM   
Susan O.
 
From  Susan O.  Posts 1681  Last 4:49 PM
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.6 Message 62276.6 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    
Hi Beth,

Do you know which six days the House Party will run? I have a character I can send to therapy, but I'll be off-line the end of January for a few days. If the Therapy is during mid-January, I'll send him. <s>

Thanks,
Susan
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#7 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 6:38 PM   
denizb33
 
From  denizb33  Posts 3001  Last Jan-19
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.7 Message 62276.7 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

Ooh, I can't wait :-)
I will try to keep my stress levels down (for therapy, ha ha) and will bring only two characters, one protagonist and one antagonist from The Face of A Lion:
Austin, 12, male, blond and blue eyed, 4'7", just entering puberty, has travelled back in time with his guide Kedi the cat, in order to save history <g> Is just learning about himself and finding that he cares deeply for his new friends...
Lady Porphyry (not her real name), ageless (evil spirit, if you like), female, long brown hair, believes the world would be a better place in a sort of communist, everyone acting for the greater good of society world - thinks individual desires should be subsumed to greater ideals.

In a semi-nutshell <g>
:-)
Deniz

http://thegirdleofmelian.blogspot.com/

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#8 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 6:42 PM   
ZanMarie
 
From  ZanMarie  Posts 1964  Last 9:15 AM
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.8 Message 62276.8 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

Beth,

I may have given you too much detail, but here goes. <G>

Hi.  I'm Laura Grace Chandler.  I'm 55, short--5 foot 2—and dumpy with a short cap of salt and pepper hair. I’m not sure I can do this.  In fact, my best friend, June is pushing me--hard.  So. I’ve  lived and worked  in Cherry Hill, Georgia all my life.  My life has turned upside down in the last 2 years since I retired after teaching high school for 30 years.  My husband, Tom, died one year ago in a wreck only 1 week before retiring after 30 years of teaching.  We were never blessed with children, but did find a lot of fulfillment in teaching.   My friend seems  to be planning a way for me to have children in my life again.  If fact, she’s  found a needy foster child who needs so much—way more than I can provide.  June wants me to be the child’s  mentor.  We’ll see.  I know I’m not good enough for that job.

Zan Marie =^..^=

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#9 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 8:45 PM   
ennubi
 
From  ennubi  Posts 181  Last 2/6/09
To  ZanMarie      [Msg # 62276.9 Message 62276.9 replying to 62276.8 62276.8 ]    
that was nicely done zanmarie....now you've tempted me to be naughty *and* a troublemaker....

"Ya'll thinkin' i'm nuts?  well, you've got hummin' bats in yer securin' barns one and all!  can't believe Andrew dragged my bones out here.  And there's no beer?  what fun is sittin' about and talkin' if there's no beer?  you get the beer goin', then folk start spillin' the guts, tempers flare hot."  Julie leaned back, stretching out to her full height, and grins viciously, showing wide, white teeth.   The massive blue-steel gun at her belt gleamed in the dull flourescent lights.  "That's when the real fun starts.  But I guess I kin sit here a spell in another one a those techno-fancy places iff'n it'll make the man happy.  Bah, gimme a proper lantern, fireplace, wood furniture...this here just ain't natural."

[Peacemaker Julie - leather cowboy-ish outfit / hat / 6' tall, prev broken nose / long blond braids.]

"How...quaint....not the most modern I've seen, but, still, effective...."  Madame Laveau drawled, flicking the light switch on and off and on again.  She gathered her sweeping green skirts, poising herself expertly on the edge of the leather sofa, and stroked the massive diamond necklace just above her impressive decolletelge.  "I understand we'll be havin' a little party of some of yer friends here soon.  I can't wait to be makin' the acquaintance of such important and influential personages who can afford quite nice technology."

Inhaling deeply, the Madame leaned forward and offered her most charming - and predatorial - smile.

[Madame Laveau - 5'8, western gown, gold curls piled on her head with a dark feather / tiny gun hidden in bosom/ owner-op of a rivership]

They know each other - Julie's the cop and Laveau's the criminal.  Not quite sure how this'll run, so I may bring one, the other, or both as what I've got time / what seems most appropriate.

ennubi

Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost.
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#10 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 9:42 PM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Lorraine      [Msg # 62276.10 Message 62276.10 replying to 62276.4 62276.4 ]    

Lorraine,

Ooops. Sorry. I thought Swithun was a man's name. <g>

You can bring more than one character, but they have to come as a couple, or a group. Otherwise I think it will become too overwhelming, particularly if a lot of people participate.

~Beth

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Edited 1/9/09   by  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz

Edited 1/9/09   by  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
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#11 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 9:43 PM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Susan O.      [Msg # 62276.11 Message 62276.11 replying to 62276.6 62276.6 ]    

Susan,

I thought I might start it on the 19th. Will that suit?

~Beth

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#12 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 9:55 PM   
Marie
 
From  Marie  Posts 163  Last Sep-22
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.12 Message 62276.12 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

How ironic, I'm dragging someone to therapy ;) 

Chase McCreaty, (only son of Hugh and Nancy McCreaty), rancher and in process of taking over the family business little by little as his father gets older.  26 years old, old south mentality.

Excerpt from WIP:

"He stood just inside the door, wiping his boots on the mat.  The straw cowboy hat covered the upper portion of his face, showing a glimpse of a wide firm mouth, and a strong squared chin, shadowed in whiskers and giving a dusty, dangerous look- had it not been for the soft fullness of his lips.  Two seconds had passed and already my lips tingled with the urge to brush against his gently and bruise with passion.  Images of heated embraces and fevered encounters had distracted me completely from matters of the heart, on paper or not, so much so that I didn’t notice the hat had risen.  In my mind, I traveled up his face with my fingers, brushing against the hard cheekbones and firm nose.  A lump broke the broad expanse of an almost too long nose, residual evidence of a fight I felt certain he had won.  His eyes were deep set, and the color of new denim, dark and full of depth, framed with thick black lashes mascara companies sold their souls for.  The shadow of the hat hid his brows, which I imagined to be strong and brown, depicted by the shadow of a beard and the faint glimpse of sideburns.  Textbook forgotten at this point, my curiosity got the best of me. I leaned ever so slightly forward and ducked my head an inch, intent on seeing the rest of this face that enthralled me so. There!  They were brown!  My satisfaction was short lived as I noticed they were drawn low over the eyes, scanning me with a mixture of concern and irritation.  " (copyright 2008 L.M.Calhoun)

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#13 of 47

     Posted 1/9/09 11:02 PM   
Lorraine
 
From  Lorraine  Posts 1133  Last Oct-1
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.13 Message 62276.13 replying to 62276.10 62276.10 ]    

<...I thought Swithun was a man's name...>

It's an odd name, I know, but it works with the weaving. (I hope) She was born on a rainy St. Swithun's Day. If you know the saints, you'll get this.

Lorraine

PS   I'm only bringing her along. She has hang-ups.

A Twist of Rotten Silk

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#14 of 47

     Posted 1/11/09 8:46 PM   
Susan O.
 
From  Susan O.  Posts 1681  Last 4:49 PM
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.14 Message 62276.14 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    
Hi All,

I'd like to send at least two characters for therapy, perhaps three. One for each "therapist." They would be Carrie, Carl and Nathan.

A summary (done for another exercise) of these characters comes from Carrie: "Where does my tale begin? It begins with the three Rivers boys, of course, because memories before them are distant, wavering impressions. My life, from earliest recollection, has been bound with theirs, like the ancient zinfandel vines, rooted in fertile Napa soil, branches reaching ever outward, toward each other.   Do I start the tale in the uncomplicated days of our youth, when we ran the vineyards with our dogs, explored the dusty, Manzanita-scented hills, or pooled our coins together to buy soda at Taylor’s Refresher? Or does the tale start at the awakening of our differences? When the cellar sheltered us from the summer heat, the racked barrels and heady scent of wine witness to that rite of passage: the first kiss. Kisses then were furtive experiments, accompanied with giggles and relief that we’d actually done it. Being the only girl, I kissed them all. Nathan, then Carl and Robby. Each kiss was unique, the soul of the man-to-be borne in it.

Or does my story start later, when the kisses spoke volumes more, and the man behind the kiss grown bolder? This is where the tale begins to turn like the tendrils of a grape vine wound around a trellis. We are grown together, bound by tendrils that won’t let go. Even if they should."
(c) 2008 Susan Montgomery

Carrie is 33, Carl is 34 and Nathan is 37. Rob never returned from the war.

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     Posted 1/13/09 3:06 AM   
Julie Weathers
 
From  Julie Weathers  Posts 1741  Last Feb-2
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.15 Message 62276.15 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    
Oh, this sounds like fun.

I'll be sending Saerowyn. He's seventy-five years old, full, silver hair and clean-shaven. He has blue eyes and even at his age, it's clear he was a handsome man in his youth. He smokes a pipe and experiments with fireworks, which doesn't always mix well. He's either senile or extremely intelligent depending on who he's talking to and if he trusts them..

Oh, he's also a wizard.

Captain Morgahn is the master of the Dancing Widow. He loves to fight and loves women more. He's 5' 8" and medium build, but very fast. He has black hair and blue eyes. He enjoys music, dancing and fast horses.

Some people think he's a pirate.

Lucine is the Baroness Chastain. She is small, but well-made with long, pale blonde hair and blue eyes. Men find her entrancing, but she has never married. Her father was going to announce her betrothal at her sixteenth birthday, but he died suddenly at her party. She never recovered from the shock and never entered a romantic relationship, but she's only twenty-two, so there may still be time if she can tear herself away from the business of handling her estates.
http://julie-weathers.blogspot.com/
Edited 1/13/09   by  Julie Weathers
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     Posted 1/13/09 8:47 AM   
Rhonddalyn
 
From  Rhonddalyn  Posts 2112  Last 12:09 PM
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.16 Message 62276.16 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    

Hi Beth,

How do  I determine my character's age when my story takes place over a 25 year span? (Why am I making this difficult for myself...I'm wondering? >g<)

Also is it to our benefit to pick a character we know well or one we want to get to know better?

Rhonddalyn
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#17 of 47

     Posted 1/13/09 9:30 AM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Julie Weathers      [Msg # 62276.17 Message 62276.17 replying to 62276.15 62276.15 ]    

Julie, I can hardly wait. <g>

~Beth

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#18 of 47

     Posted 1/13/09 9:36 AM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Rhonddalyn      [Msg # 62276.18 Message 62276.18 replying to 62276.16 62276.16 ]    

Rhonddalyn,

Well, either one. Or both. Bringing the one you don't know has obvious advantages, but the one you do know could end up surprising you.

As to the age, just pick one and go with that. Or I could pick the age for you. <g>

~Beth

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#19 of 47

     Posted 1/13/09 10:43 AM   
Tara Parker
 
From  Tara Parker  Posts 1581  Last Jan-23
To  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz      [Msg # 62276.19 Message 62276.19 replying to 62276.1 62276.1 ]    
Beth,

This is a secondary character - but who knows - he may become the main.   I seem to have a clearer feel for him than my jogger at the moment.  <g>

Barnabus Finn is 45 years old.  He is 6'6" and big-boned.  He has short black hair and brown eyes.  He is the only person left in the world that can spot demons living in humans and only three people know this.  He was a 4th-grade teacher before the gift (curse as he sees it) was forcibly passed on to him.  His wife was taken by demons 10 years ago. 

This sounds like fun.  <g> 

Tara

My thoughts exactly...
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#20 of 47

     Posted 1/13/09 12:15 PM   
Beth S/SL-Writing Biz
 
From  Beth S/SL-Writing Biz  Posts 10179  Last 3:40 PM
To  Tara Parker      [Msg # 62276.20 Message 62276.20 replying to 62276.19 62276.19 ]    

Tara,

<<He is the only person left in the world that can spot demons living in humans and only three people know this.>>

How very cool. I'm liking this.

~Beth

 

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